Any other thoughts on my stuff? I've been waiting to work on it again in case people have crits. I recall MS saying he liked the legs, lol, but if they're a little long I'll tweak them a little.
The only thing that might be a thing is I wonder if there should be a line for the lower edge of the ribs. I could be completely wrong though, lol. But overall I actually like it.
Much better dude. I'm not sure what to say about the leg length (lol), as they could reasonably look like that depending on the perspective. However, it looks like the legs/feet are of different sizes. Also, her left foot looks like its been broken! I think the position of her left lower leg would be in a different place, so perhaps he draw that leg.
Her right hand is also looking kind of bulbous.
Also, if it's not too distracting, I'm still for the idea of little Derpy's flying around her head.
I actually like #2 better. Of course it's just a sketch, but Dash's legs need to be fixed up. Also, it looks like you consistently draw Dash smaller than Pinkie, at least in all the drawings I've seen in this thread. Not sure if that's on purpose.
Eh, I wasn't sure, but MS's redline has more appropriate proportions.
Gotta say I agree with a lot of this. But! I think Octavia's waist looks weird, maybe because of the top of the skirt, it looks too straight, instead of curving around her body. Furthermore, I'm not sure if her midsection is too short or not.