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17733 No. 17733
Fancy Intro for those who never read FoE:
The megaspells detonated. The world died. While most of the surviving ponies did so in underground Stables, the pegasi hid in the clouds. Rainbow Dash, the most celebrated of their ranks, disagreed with their abandoning the world below and left to seek those in need. In doing so, she was branded a traitor. For when Rainbow Dash left, she took the key to the pegasi's continued dominance with her. To retrieve this "key", the pegasi hired a mercenary to bring it back. The mercenary was Gilda, an old friend from long ago. The "key" is Dash's head.

Part 1
G-Doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1F6unvBj6cSe5KPOivf1xPSh7dBirjAJ-41xgGPjEV-M/edit?hl=en_US

Fim Fic Link:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/7010/Fallout-Equestria%3A-Duel

And it:ll probably end up here eventually:
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/fallout-equestria-side-stories.html

On the advisement of some others, I decided to give this its own thread. So, ya know, read, comment, and all that jazz. Oh and this is the first of three parts.
Enjoy!

Also the pic is from:
http://naroclie.deviantart.com/art/Reunion-258132017
>> No. 17763
>>17733
I liked this

my favorite part would be the blimp, also gilda, give her a break

All those dead ponies really sadden me.

Looking forward the next part
>> No. 17764
Did you get a greenlight from Kkat, Pacce? Or is this just your own thing?
>> No. 17769
>>17764
Pacce has gone rogue and is operating independently from Kkat's central command.

Also I can't <i>fucking</i> wait for the next part.
>> No. 17772
>>17764
Pacce has gone rogue and is operating independently from Kkat's central command.

Also I can't fucking wait for the next part.
>> No. 17796
>>17764
Actually, yeah.
...
Well, as much as anyone else.
>> No. 17798
>>17764
Actually, yeah.
She's not gonna put it on the main page, but she told me to go for it.
>> No. 17961
So I got this comment from the lady herself:


Just finished reading this first chapter. And it was beautiful.

Your combat sequences were great. I loved the pacing. Your characters were spot-on. But best of all, I loved the setting of that tragic, once-joyous flying hotel. That place... that was a work of art. The Pinkie Pie hologram was touching, as well as a wonderful call-back to the Sweetie Belle illusion in the Stable-Tec HQ. After that, each detail, each new room... and Dash's sorrowful reveal of what happened to the passengers... they all blended into one of the most compelling set-pieces I've read in a long time.

Thank you for that. And I can't wait to read what happens next!



--Kkat
>> No. 25036
Part two where?
>> No. 25624
Just read it and gotta say it was pretty damn good.
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