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27468 No. 27468
Completed works, as RS
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xfxwf9B0u0UBOkhSvKusa6vEfPDYpU6OM2JWf2RElYs/edit

Completed works in pastebin
http://pastebin.com/u/mtguy

OC tumblr why not
http://askwongman.tumblr.com/

The Equestrian Renaissance, chapter 20:
http://pastebin.com/9zsgg3eU
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=397&textsize=0&chapter=20
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>> No. 27470
Awesome, new thread already! And the tumblr sillynes continues.

I was wondering, about your second person stories, are you planning to write one for all the mane cast?
>> No. 27471
>>27470
I've got ideas for doing the rest of the mane cast, but I don't know if I'll ever get around to them.

The next would probably be Dash. And anon would be a woman. In part because Dash is still a lesbian after all, and secondly I think there's a shortage of anon female 2nd person stories. That might be harder for me to do, at least sex scene wise, since I'm not a woman. Bit of a jump.

For Rarity, I think anon would be more or less unnamed Spike, or Spike-like at any rate.

And the idea I have for the Fluttershy story would be pretty grimdark. Maybe too much so. Might be overbaked.
>> No. 27473
Oh god! More!
>> No. 27476
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27476
>>27473
More Wongman? You got it.

http://askwongman.tumblr.com/post/20312059255

pic unrelated
>> No. 27477
>>27471
>For Rarity, I think anon would be more or less unnamed Spike, or Spike-like at any rate.
I like this. Very much.

I waited for the new thread:
Bittersweet (Ed)
http://pastebin.com/XwQjJZ8p

I really liked this one, and not just because Pinkie is #2 in my books. I've gotta say, the whole Debbie Downer thing gets really old really fast, but there's times when it's either endearing or hilarious. Overall though, I'd recommend toning it down just a bit. You want and need to establish what a sad bastard the Anon is, and I understand, but it gets to a point where you say, "Why hasn't this guy just killed himself yet? Why don't I out him out of his misery?"
Other than that, lots of feeling. Pinkie being Pinkie. I was looking forward to that scene in the theatre as soon as you wrote they were headed there. I wasn't disappointed. I will say that I think Applejack's story had some more...erotic qualities to it. This was cute for the most part. Ending was really good, a tad predictable once Anon lists off the other kajillion possibilities, but still great overall. The whole thing reminds me of another story in a good way.
No major mistakes as far as I could tell either. I tried to leave everything as intact as possible, as usual. I can't remember any other gripes at the moment, so I'll leave it at that. If you wanted to know anything else, I'm sure you would have (or will) ask.
These stories are reminding me of the older stuff, and I really like that. Keep it up!
On a semi-unrelated note (no pun intended) I'll be getting to more stories in the next few weeks as you'd guess if you wonder about that kind of stuff. If you're slowing down (not that that's bad or anything) then I should speed up and take advantage of it. This is going to sound silly again, but is there anything you (or anyone else?) would like done sooner rather than later?
>> No. 27487
>>27477
Dude, what are you in real life? An editor? An editor aspirant? You seem very diligent and effective with it.
>> No. 27488
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>>27487
>Dude, what are you in real life? An editor? An editor aspirant?
Oh shucks, you're gonna make me blush! No, it's nothing as grand as that, though I've been asked multiple times if I'm an English major...
I'm just a dedicated (read: anal retentive) do-gooder who can't read through a story that has typos and such. It yanks me right out of the action when I stumble against a "there" instead of "their" or "should of" instead of "should have". I tried the "editor" game, and I do some work here and there, but that's probably best left outside the thread. I've rambled enough as is. Thanks for the compliment. (I think?) Dohohoh.
>> No. 27489
>>27477
I've got no preferences. I can say that the currently most read are Equestrian Renaissance and I Wish I Might. Eq. Ren. is finally picking up readership. Wish is going to be a beast to proof.

My writing has definitely dropped off, although I can't say the same for my productivity, now that I'm fucking around with drawing. Hopefully some day I'll be good at it.
>> No. 27491
>>27489
You and me both brotha, you and me both.
I've read up to the newest chapter of Eq. Ren, but for some reason I forgot to proof. I must have been enjoying myself too much.
Oh lawdy, what'd wrong with I Wish I Might other than the fact that it's probably about 30 pages long?
>> No. 27495
>>27491
Oh nothing, it's just big. Proofing it the first round was like a long, feverish nightmare. Like those ones where you keep doing the same simple task over and over and it never stops.
>> No. 27496
>>27471
>For Rarity, I think anon would be more or less unnamed Spike, or Spike-like at any rate.

Fucking awesome!
>> No. 27511
>>27496
So Anon is going to be underaged?
>> No. 27512
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>>27511
probably not
>> No. 27521
>>27512
Oh lawdy, I just realized we could have had some delicious /ss/.
She's at least going to be a bit old for him right? I mean, don't make her OLD, but he's going to be in his early twenties or something right?
I can see it now...Spike applying for a job at her new office, getting coffee, running paperwork and designs from one place to another...
;~;
>> No. 27543
I too approve of cougar Rarity and teen/young adult Anonspike.
>> No. 27544
>>27521
/ss/? Google-fu is failing me.
>> No. 27546
>>27544
/straight shota/ board.
boys with women, basically.
>> No. 27552
Underage spike! Great idea. Take my money.
>> No. 27616
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27616
>>27552
Did underage human Spike in Exploding Twice.

In this story, if I do it, the anonymous character will be a young adult with an obsession with his boss's best friend.

Also, tumblr apparently only allows ten pics per post. So I had to cut my eleven panel comic short. Pic's the missing panel.
>> No. 27642
>>27470
stupid nagging inspirations.

I'll likely be delving into side characters.
>> No. 27644
whoa! you have a tumblr now RS? I just sent in my first question!
>> No. 27652
The Equestrian Renaissance, Chapter 21

http://pastebin.com/rkePNbJH
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=397&textsize=0&chapter=21
>> No. 27653
Hey, can you post a one-image compilation of your latest Wongman post?
>> No. 27655
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27655
>>27653
>> No. 27714
>>27652
Nice, I'll be reading it.
>> No. 27720
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27720
>> No. 27722
>>27720
burn in hell dickfag
>> No. 27726
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27726
I tried to do a thing.
>> No. 27727
>>27726
thats trippy man, and them eyes
>> No. 27782
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27782
Bit of a new direction with these stories, delving into period pieces. Also, these second person humanized ponies x anon are getting too long. They consume too big of a chunk of my time, and readers are complaining as well, so I'm breaking them up into chapters and releasing them serially.

http://pastebin.com/BL2EDvKb

ePFA link to follow. WIP not related.
>> No. 27783
>>27782
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=641&warning=9
>> No. 27796
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27796
Finished, I guess.

Starting another tumblr for non-Wongman art.

http://ragingsemimiscellani.tumblr.com/
>> No. 28078
Late Night Joke has been updated. The first of many to come.
http://pastebin.com/5mbmmhVt
>> No. 28109
>>27796
Uh... the art looks... nice?
>> No. 28148
Pink Velvet Pie and Lessons Learned have been updated.

http://pastebin.com/uYdrVpxR
http://pastebin.com/TXKeGbb3
>> No. 28150
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28150
Equestrian Renaissance, chapter 22

http://pastebin.com/SM17H2hR
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=397&textsize=0&chapter=22

pic unrelated
>> No. 28153
Chapters like this are why I love Equestrian Ren.
>> No. 28156
>>28153
is it because we're back to the mane cast? The action? The allusions to old fics and what might be to come?
>> No. 28160
Another anon here.
All of those things and more important, more characters doing stuff, luna and big mac interacting and saying and thinking stuff will always be more interesting than a narrative that quickly scans through the idea that they met in the hallway and it was indeed very startling to both the involved.
>> No. 28165
Eq Renaissance Part 15 has been updated.
http://pastebin.com/urFQ2P6G

I also noticed that I mistakenly posted part 22 as part 21, and missed part 21 altogether. That's been corrected now.

What kind of jet was Gilda supposed to be flying? Can fighters actually pull off transcontinental flights on one tank?

Let me know if/when you have a title for your currently untitled (chapter 1) piece.
>> No. 28173
>>28165
What fighter? I dunno. Some fictional pony themed fighter. I think an F-15 has the range to take it from, say, New York to the UK.

Ferry range for fighters is a lot further than fighters configured for combat. They have extra, larger fuel tanks and they don't carry ordinance.

The Zecora wip is only called "Fever." There are no chapter titles.
>> No. 28175
>>28173
You called it a war plane and a fighter. Which is why I ask. I'll rename Fever when I get the chance.
>> No. 28224
So I've started another OC tumblr

>oh god why?

Yeah, yeah. The power of the muse compels me.

Fever update should be next.

http://storyoflittleluck.tumblr.com/
>> No. 28332
Equestrian Renaissance Part 21 has been updated, mostly because I didn't want to do another old piece with so much new stuff left unread and unedited. I hadn't read 21 yet either. Nice, but a bit strange. I didn't quite understand the direction, perhaps because I haven't read the previous Appleoosa chapter in a long while.
Oh, 22 was listed as private for some reason, but I've fixed that now (I hope). Also renamed the unnamed chapter to Fever: Chapter 1.
Well shit, it turns out I haven't read anything past chapter 18. Well fuck me. I'll have to edit those next so I'm at least mostly up to date...
>> No. 28350
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28350
>>28332
listed as private? That's weird.

Anyway, Fever, chapter 2

http://pastebin.com/GxHvHT7h
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=641&textsize=0&chapter=2

pic unrelated
>> No. 28351
>>28350
Yeah, it happened with the upload before that too. It seemed just fine, but when I went back to the pastebin it showed as private.

Uploaded fever just now, and it says public, so let's see if it stays that way...
>> No. 28365
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28365
Equestrian Renaissance chapter next. Then may take a breather to do some light one-off porn from my old to-do list, before going back to EQ Ren or Fever. Also, I can entertain a draw request or two if anybody has one.
>> No. 28374
>>28365
Is that Sweetie Belle giving birth to a larvae?
>> No. 28376
>>28374
That's Twist getting some attention from Snails. There's more coming.
>> No. 28377
flutterguy and twigay!
>> No. 28390
>>28365
Pinkie Pie on a speedboat, with some other pony para-sailing behind her. With a look of utter horror on their face
>> No. 28391
I don't know why I can't stop making new tumblrs.

http://itsamadmadmadmadequestria.tumblr.com/
>> No. 28501
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28501
The Equestrian Renaissance, Chapter 23

http://pastebin.com/5J6YE6aL
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=397&textsize=0&chapter=23

pic unrelated
>> No. 28503
>>28350
Semi, I hate you. Once again, you've got me compelled--and unlike the others, this one is episodic, so I'm waiting worried for what's going to happen. (Which is to say, I'm glad you've worked out a better system, and this blew me away.)

Can I make a request? I want you to try to get some fiction published. You're such a damn good writer--the world deserves to see your stories. I won't say you're wasted on FIM fanfics, because you enthrall and thrill us. But you deserve so much more recognition and respect than you get.
>> No. 28504
>>28501
HOLY FUCK! DAMN! SHIT!
I'm not very eloquent when i'm this excited. BUT DAMN!
>> No. 28505
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28505
The following have been updated:
Eq Ren Part 19
http://pastebin.com/c2m5Hy7q

Eq Ren Part 20
http://pastebin.com/d04QC7Rp

Eq Ren Part 22
http://pastebin.com/1QxB4FRP

Eq Ren Part 23
http://pastebin.com/rGUCZ3Az

I really like how short and sweet the recent chapters have been, but at the same time they only leave me wanting more. Surprisingly enough, it was the hay in the bowl that really caught my eye in these chapters. Don't know why, but I really liked that detail. I'll have to go over 16 and 17 next time. Hopefully this'll make up for my lack of editing lately. I still want to take a sizeable bite out of the rest of the pastebin though. And now I'm rambling. Can't wait to see where you go from here, I'll probably read Fever as well next time. Thanks for a great read as always.
>> No. 28526
The following have been updated:

A Nightmare comes
http://pastebin.com/w4jDfPHM

An Evil Enchantress
http://pastebin.com/aCLHJV04

Baby Carrot
http://pastebin.com/7iES95cP
>> No. 28540
So, RS it seems that for now you are finding more appeal in drawing than writting.
>> No. 28549
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28549
>>28540
Hmm

I don't know if I can say I'm having more fun drawing. I'm mostly feeling frustrated and discouraged.

And I definitely can't say it's more rewarding. As a writer, I've had 800,000 reads, shit-tons of fanart, appreciation from friends and strangers alike. As an illustrator, I've got maybe 80 tumblr followers and half again as many likes in total. (And somebody's been uploading my 34 to paheal, there's a feather in the cap)

Am I more obsessed with drawing? Oh, definitely. Partly by design. I went back and forth on whether or not I would do this for a year or so, because if I was going to do it, I was going to commit to doing it and not give up.

All that said, the last eq. ren. chapter was some 4,000 words, and the Fever chapter before that was 7,000, so it's not like I'm slacking on the writing.
>> No. 28635
>>28350
I'm not from the US, is this based on the real war or are you just making stuff up on the idea of the war?
>> No. 28825
>>28635

Fever is set during the U.S. Civil War, 1861-1865.

The character is complete fiction, but the events and figures mentioned were real.

Speaking of which, here's chapter 3. Memorial Day almost snuck up on me this year.

http://pastebin.com/qGMC9bEQ
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=641&textsize=0&chapter=3
>> No. 28879
>>28825
Chapter one's been updated.
http://pastebin.com/0YfvJXvr
>> No. 29174
The Equestrian Renaissance, Chapter 24

http://pastebin.com/dKDbTzvU
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=397&textsize=0&chapter=24

I was kinda reluctant to start this chapter because I expected it to be a nightmare of attributions. But I got through it.

So at this point in the story, we've got seven humans stuck in pony Equestria. The surviving mane cast, plus Big Mac and Zecora. When I was originally planning this whole thing, I was expecting at this point to open it up to some pornographic side-chapter requests. Kind of like I did with the Pinkie x Mrs. Cake, Dash x Gilda, and Rarity x Blueblood chapters. Well I'm really not in much of a position to accept the requests, but I guess I might be able to entertain a couple, from anybody who's been reading and might have an interest. I'd have to be pretty selective though, thems the breaks.
>> No. 29181
>>29174
>Pinkie x Mrs. Cake
Whoa whoa, what chapter was that?
I somehow missed chapters 16 and 17 along the way, so I'll correct those now before I read the newest chapter.

>selective
Did you have any criteria in mind?
>> No. 29182
>>29181
Ah, well, if it's human x pony, it's got to be one of the humans involved.

I've got to be able to make it make sense within the plot of the story. So if I can't find some way to make it work, I can't really do it.
>> No. 29183
>>29182
I figured as much. Hmm, I suppose I'll get the ball rolling with Celestia x Big Mac.
>> No. 29188
>>29174
Uhhhh, i have been waiting on those interactions! It was great. Especially pinkie.
But talking about sex, they'll want to fuck their counterparts, at least dash and rarity.
Aj will want mac. Zecora will want golden.
And fluttershy feels left out, dash (either one) would probably want to make her feel better.
>> No. 29197
>>29188
>Dash wanting to have sex with herself
Makes sense
>Rarity
Whaaa?

>Zecora looking for Golden Delicious
That would be fun, especially if he didn't recognize her and if their relationship didn't exist in ponyland.

AJ's had both Macs before.

>>29183
I want to change my suggestion to Luna and Big Mac (Pony and Human respectively of course). She recognized him immediately, and unless you've addressed that in chapter 24, I'd like to see some development there.

And here's chapter 16 updated.
http://pastebin.com/9K1RtyLA
>> No. 29211
>>29183
>Mac x Celestia

I'd have no idea how to even do that, especially with what's coming. Besides, I've still got plans for your Mac x Gilda request.

>>29188

>Zecora x Golden

>>29197

>especially if he didn't recognize her and if their relationship didn't exist in ponyland.

Ah, but the whole set-up is based on that old Zecora x Golden story, which was set in the ponyverse originally.

>makes sense

agreed
>> No. 29215
>>29211
Ah, I figured you were more or less reversing the situation.

>GildaxMac
>Griffin Gilda
>Human Mac
I don't even want to imagine the kind of pain he's got coming.

I'm a little out of the loop, but I'll take your word on special interrogations not working into the plot. I wouldn't want to bog things down by suggesting Mac be in too many scenes. I wonder if Luna's going to go check on her own Big Mac... Lunatosh is in this continuity isn't it?
>> No. 29221
how about an established couple in a 3way with one of their counterparts?

>>29211
>RS writing more Gilda
fantastic news

a while back there was some talk of a princess raping Gilda (or vice versa). I would like to see that happen in the human world
>> No. 29227
>>29215
it'll be pony mac with Gilda. Yeah, Lunatosh is canon. Size of the role isn't really an issue, they both have huge roles to play in the chapters ahead.
>> No. 29235
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29235
>>29227
>pony Mac with Gilda
Well I guess I've got brain problems.
For some reason I can't stop imagining Luna giving Gilda the beating of her life for touching her man...
>> No. 29237
Here's chapter 17.
http://pastebin.com/G6NwrceZ

I'll bump when I finish 24.
>> No. 29242
>>29227
Human gilda?
>> No. 29245
>>29242
Nah. Griffon Gilda. I think, with two chapters and one moment of badassery, human Gilda has done her part for this story.
>> No. 29261
>>29245
Pony mac and not human gilda has already been done, but awright
>> No. 29269
Hey RS, I can't recall if you have written a story of a human/pony futa fucking a male human, have you?
I'd be very interested.
>> No. 29273
>>29269
Hmm. Human Spike makes a cameo in the human futa mane cast orgy. I don't think he gets fucked though.

I don't think I've written something like that.
>> No. 29277
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29277
>>29273
Well, you see the idea comes from this one conversation in the mlpg.
The OC in question , a Vinyl clone , DJ Acid, is supposed to be the height of an 8 stories building but in this one she's human size and a dickgirl, no vag.

Her stories always come with very weird fetishes lime vore, macro, anal vore, body transformation, etc. But what I want to sugest/request is not that but a more simple dickgirl fucks and dominates a human male setting, maybe with some gradual chemical/pheromone enslaving.

I hope you find at least one aspect of all this appealing enough to you so that you consider including it in one of your stories. Hell, even just the futa-fucks-male element with any character involved would be killer.
What do you think?
>> No. 29287
>>29277
I don't think I'll be able to squeeze that into my current workload, sorry.

Now if futa female fucking a male pony sounds like it might be interesting to you...

Well, all I'm going to say is hold on. Patience will be rewarded.
>> No. 29288
Chapter 24. Sorry it took a while, I'd almost forgotten to post it.
http://pastebin.com/yVWvbTLY
>> No. 29290
>>29287

Just as good, thanks!
I'll be waiting.
>> No. 29291
>>29277
okay seriously i need more sauces on this, emergent 4chan mind control transformation futa my little pony is too many gelbooru tags to pass up

it's in risk of falling off the internet, and that would be unforgivable to future generations
>> No. 29297
>>29291
More sources? I don't think there's more. It's just a bunch of anons dropping some fetish greentexts in the mlpg late at night.

You can go there when they are posted of search for night threads in the thread archive/locator.
There is so much variety of crazy and weird fetishes there, there's also rping.
>> No. 29306
Eq. Ren., chapter 25

http://pastebin.com/RJ9VeMHM
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=397&textsize=0&chapter=25

I hadn't originally wanted to continue this story line yet, but I had to get this chapter out of the way to get to some other stuff on the human side.
>> No. 29507
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29507
if your still considering requests for Equestrian Renaissance...
everything in this image including the ridiculous apple strap-on
>> No. 29939
I wish I lived on some planet that had a rotational period of, say, 30 or 32 hours.

That way I could get a full night's sleep every night. Sleep in as late as I want. Casually get ready for my nine hour shift. Take care of all of my errands. Do all the drawing that I want, and still have plenty of time for writing. I could stay up as late as I want having fun. Then do the same thing over again every single day.

As it is, there's just not enough time in the day to do all the things I want to do.

Happy 4th of July, everybody. Here, have a Lunch. It's on me.

http://pastebin.com/gqvjRgbJ
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=719&warning=9

Sorry, but I didn't even have the time to proof. Now if you'll excuse me, I must go celebrate my country by blowing up a small piece of it.
>> No. 29942
>>29939
Not a bad story, yeah you should probably check it some time for mistakes, but it was a pretty cool concept anyway.
>> No. 29963
>>29939
>Watermellon Pony wedges herself between your legs.

Oh you!
>> No. 29991
>>29942
>>29939
I'll get on it as soon as I'm able, which won't be soon. If you post a proofed version before that, I'll go over that one instead.
Happy Belated Canada Day
>> No. 30152
Fever, chapter 4

http://pastebin.com/JfF3LMJ6
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=641&textsize=0&chapter=4

I had originally meant for this to be a much larger chapter, but there was a natural chapter break.

That means the next chapter should be coming very soon. In fact, I have a good notion to just hammer the rest of this story out relatively quickly. I've got too much unfinished shit going on.
>> No. 30281
Fever, Chapter 5

http://pastebin.com/RJQEvPCh
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=641&textsize=0&chapter=5
>> No. 30292
>>30281
YES!
>> No. 30370
>>30281
Love it. I'm such a sucker for a happy ending, and I can't imagine people in that situation had many back then... As usual, your prose sets the scene perfectly. Very very excited for Chapter 6; thanks so much for writing!
>> No. 30596
It's been a while, so let's do this right:

Breakfast (Ed)
http://pastebin.com/pzrwbajB
>Gravy and runny yolks
I will never understand how people like these. Hilarious all the same though.

Fever Chapter 2
http://pastebin.com/t0Hw21y8
;~;

Fever Chapter 3
http://pastebin.com/5JKYigi1

The Equestrian Renaissance Part 25
http://pastebin.com/7s6Ga0A1
>everythingturnedoutbetterthanexpected.jpg
Can't say I like him heading for Canterlot, but hopefully he has his wits about him.

Lunch
http://pastebin.com/PfCdmegL
>Watermelon Zebra
I'm not even gonna touch that one. I've said too much already.
>Hot Dog's a futa
This is a pretty funny series if you ask me. Tons of typos, but funny. Lookin' forward to Dinner now.

I wanted to get to Fever 4 and 5, but I'll probably do those offline and/or upload them in a separate post. So have these for now.
>> No. 30603
Here's Fever Chapter 4
http://pastebin.com/iw67ehjt

aaaand Fever Chapter 5
http://pastebin.com/evg495t2

At least I'm caught up now. Sort of.
>> No. 30604
>>30603

Thanks a bunch. I hope to have Fever finished within the next two weeks.
>> No. 30605
>>30604
Least I can do considering I'm supposed to be doing these regularly and had to take a leave of absence for about 6 weeks. I would've done "I Wish I Might" but it was 56 pages at 1.5 spacing. I'll try tackling it tonight and working my way backwards if I can.
>> No. 30624
How big is Twilight's telescope supposed to be in I Wish I Might? It says 12 inches, but that doesn't sound right at all and 12 feet probably wouldn't fit in the car too easily.
I can have the thing posted just as soon as I have a new length.
>> No. 30628
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30628
>>30624
It's 12 inches in diameter. Telescopes are usually measured by how big their lenses are.
>> No. 30629
>>30628
I thought it might be a matter of girth. I guess I'll just leave it as is then.

I Wish I Might (Ed)
http://pastebin.com/uvQh5VrT

I've gotta say, the first half or so felt kind of stale, and I couldn't quite get behind the mental image of a black Twilight. It really picked up around the second half though, and I couldn't stop smiling. Loved the Destination Void references, assuming of course that that's what you had in mind.
Kinda preferred Pinkie's, but a good one nonetheless.
>> No. 30663
Edited:

The Rapering Part 7
http://pastebin.com/pH7GZ8rs
Renamed it "Tentacletacular" in line with other Rapering stories that use their chapter names rather than chapter numbers.

Rainlight
http://pastebin.com/pvCHevAG
I hadn't actually read this one at all.

I'll have Fall Weather Friends with Benefits ready tomorrow.
>> No. 30704
Fall Weather Friends with Benefits (ED)
http://pastebin.com/3hyhGB4k

Better late than never, right?
>> No. 30716
Was I supposed to edit An Orgy Makes it All Complete? Or does it fall into the same category as Cumcakes?

Here's Grand Mal
http://pastebin.com/v9WZBzLX

If I can ask, what prompted this story? I can't remember what was happening when it came out, and it doesn't seem to fit in with any of your other stuff.
>> No. 30747
Girl, You'll Be a Woman Soon, has been edited.
http://pastebin.com/PGH68aph
>> No. 30751
>>30629
never read it. All sci fi matters are my own speculation based on hard science

>>30716
heh, yeah, you can ignore that one. One of those fics I'd like to forget.

Anyway, the continuing Fever saga, Chapter 6

http://pastebin.com/QHBcBgUA
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=641&textsize=0&chapter=6
>> No. 30754
>>30751
Uploaded to the pastebin, I'll get around to editing it later tonight or tomorrow.
http://pastebin.com/5TStdU6g

I don't think you'd kid around about this kind of stuff, so I'm really surprised you haven't read it. I'd highly recommend it. Destination Void is one of my favourites of Herbert. Though, almost all of his work is excellent.

As for the "Orgy," don't be hard on yourself. It's a bit of a crazy concept, but I highly enjoyed it. I'll leave it be if you prefer though.
>> No. 30767
>>30754
Updated the newest Fever chapter.
http://pastebin.com/5TStdU6g

It's the same link anyways.
>> No. 30774
>>30754
I suppose it wasn't so much the end product as the way I felt while writing it. Like it was forced and no longer fun.

Fever, chapter 7
http://pastebin.com/iWKCVinU
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=641&textsize=0&chapter=7
>> No. 30782
>>30774
Fever: Chapter 7
pastebin.com/EEu5HAnW

Uploaded AND edited. It wasn't terribly long (not that there's anything wrong with that) so I read it and edited it right away. The fact that there's a chapter 7 at all tipped me off that things weren't all sunshine and happiness.

Can't wait for some asskickin' action in 8.
>> No. 30792
>>30774
Would probably had beaten the store guy much more in that situation, if not killed him.
>> No. 30794
And... done. Chapter 8, and the conclusion of the story.

http://pastebin.com/vR5LTcSb
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=641&textsize=0&chapter=8

As with the others, it went on longer than I had wanted, and I'm not happy with the result. Nothing I can do about that now.

When I had originally conceived of this story, I had also thought of a companion piece to go with it. It was to be a Western, human anon x humanized Little Strongheart, set just a little bit later, and maybe a recurring character between the two stories, just to have a connection.

I don't think that story will happen now. But you never know, you know?
>> No. 30801
>>30794
I'm not from USA so i don't really know much about the war.
At the end, the guy helped who helped them after they finally escaped the burning house, he said somethings. I didn't understand, the war was to star again?
>> No. 30805
>>30801
Immediately after the war, there was the very real threat of pardoned Confederate soldiers regrouping into guerrilla armies that could have wrecked havok for years. The civilian leadership in the South was in ruins and it would take years before it was built. In the interim, the various Southern states were administered by a series of what were essentially military governors. There was no major guerrilla action, but there were a series of riots and terrorist attacks (the original KKK being one such group that carried out such acts), and both federal troops and state militias were brought in to keep the piece.

James Longstreet, who's got something of a cameo here, was one such commander. He had been an important general for the South, then reswore allegiance to the US and tried to keep the piece. Even using black troops to do so. In the process, he won the ire of Confederate patriots. To this day there are revisionist histories that blame him for losing the war for the South.

Longstreet also alludes to War in Mexico involving the French. This would be the so called French Intervention in Mexico, or sometimes the Franco-Mexican War.
>> No. 30833
Here's Fever Chapter 8 edited.
http://pastebin.com/AMvtTWvK

By my count, our protag fired 17 shots before reloading 16. Does that mean he had one chambered already?

A sweet little series if you ask me. Personally, I preferred it to Twilight's, but not Pinkie's anon story. I'll just say I'm a tad disappointed they didn't end up in Canada at all. Har har.

Looking forward to the next EqRen.
>> No. 30841
I love all of your work ragingsemi, including fever. I can't wait to see some damsel in distress action in Rarity's if you end up doing her. Can't wait for more of your greatness good sir.
>> No. 31151
Mister Semi, sir.

I throughly enjoyed reading Regrowth/Our last goodbye/I wish i might/ Bittersweet and recommended them to everyone(since the pony part is only hinted) and I'm reading Fever at the moment.

I only wish to make you understand how much I loved your last works, typos aside(anyone can do a few mistakes here and there) I hope you keep on writing exquisite works of beauty like these, instead of standard clopfiction; I may be out of the fandom, but I keep a look on fimfiction just for your updates.

Forever faithful,

TrelaTyarelis
>> No. 31159
>>31151
I second this post. Story adds to the stuff so much that it won't be forgotten.
>> No. 31171
>>31151
If you're still finding typos in the edited versions, please bring them to my attention.
>> No. 31183
Will do.
>> No. 31188
Is there somewhere where all the stories are collected? Is the docs document up to date? The Fimfiction account? I wanted to collect all Raging semi stories into a single large document so it would be easier to store them, but I dont' want to be leaving things behind, and he has written a shit-ton of stuff.
>> No. 31190
>>31188
If you want all of the stories, the pastebin is probably your best bet. It also includes almost all of the HFPS stories as well.
Unfortunately, they are not all edited as yet, but the pastebin is more complete than the Completed Works GoogleDoc which is currently missing Fever, Lunch, and perhaps a few other stories - so no, it is not up to date.

To my knowledge, the EPFA account is up to date, and the FimFiction account is not.
Hope that helps.
>> No. 32457
The Equestrian Renaissance, chapter 26

http://pastebin.com/pz8MGpWH
http://explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=397&textsize=0&chapter=26
>> No. 32458
>>32457
OH DEAR GOD! I waited and waited but i didn't lose hope. Now it's here, and it's awesome!
>> No. 32465
Oh crap, I forgot about this because shit hit the fan and never thought of coming back to check. Thank you and sorry, and on it.
>> No. 32566
>>32457
Added to the pastebin archive.
http://pastebin.com/TcRsXDRL

I also happened to notice two errors in my previously edited copy of Dash of the Titans, so I've gone ahead and corrected those.

You can find the edited edited version here:
http://pastebin.com/cAWqwjtz

I'll just say I'm terribly stressed for time so I'll get around to reading and editing the new chapter sometime next week.
>> No. 32568
>>32566
Cool, take your time.
>> No. 33269
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33269
Just passed one million reads. So thanks for reading.
>> No. 33271
>>33269
Combining Fimfiction in the count?
>> No. 33527
bump
>> No. 33533
So, should we expect some more writing with the new season here to boost you up?
>> No. 34137
Here's hoping we can keep our heads above water.
>> No. 34145
>>33271
yeah

>>33533
I'm kinda doubting it. Guess we'll see.

I really did not like the premiere.
>> No. 34858
Newest story updated at the pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/TcRsXDRL

Sch’Ma’Utz huh? I'm starting to regret that I haven't read it. I was going to save it as your last piece I ever read but now I'm now so sure.
Nice trick with the water. I'm guessing most people, myself included, thought Spike would magically transport them out. He also could've pulled a Jackie Chan to bend the bars, but I spose that's not as useful as just melting them.
Glad to see some more cross story continuity in the form of that letter to Celestia. Can we expect Spike to hulk out on Luna?
>> No. 34866
>>34858
Here's an updated Poner.
http://pastebin.com/XnV9UkSv

I swear I have an edited copy on my computer somewhere, but I started from scratch for convenience's sake. I'll be getting much more done one the holidays kick into fuller gear. Next on my list are An Orgy Makes It All Complete, Lost and Found in Equestria, Unmovable, and Soft Candy. Basically, complete page 1 of the pastebin is the priority. Then work my way back. What's in the works for a new story?
>> No. 34872
Decided, in editing An Orgy Makes it All Complete, that I'd be better off leaving the original with all its "errors" intact, and then create an "edited" version with a tad more consistency with regards to gender pronouns.

http://pastebin.com/pxtr8W0s

Which means I've introduced an (UnEd) qualifier. I've put it on AOMiaC as well as your Cumcakes story. Which means I might take a crack at sobering it up and posting an (Ed) version. Maybe, maybe not.
Sage to make up for my accidental double post last time.
>> No. 34875
>>34866

>what's in the works?

here you go:

http://pastebin.com/zCGrRJy9
>> No. 34878
>>34875
It took me until the very end to see what you did there. I loved it.
At first i thought it was gonna be like the onew where the guy finds Aj, pinkie or twilight, but this time with rainbow dash and a female.
Anyway, loved it.
>> No. 34880
>>34875
How did I know that you'd post something new once I edited something old? Equivalent exchange eh? Just under a week before winter break kicks in, so I'll get around to editing it then.

Have a link in the meanwhile:
http://pastebin.com/EqmmGpjR
>> No. 34922
>>34875
Interesting. Wasn't quite sure if it was going to be Snips or Snails, or maybe even Twist or Dinky but I figured it out by the time the train was mentioned.

Here's a little more quid pro quo.

Hurt (Ed):
http://pastebin.com/EqmmGpjR
Hit a little too close to home.

Unmovable (Ed):
http://pastebin.com/JdBxxLcB
Another story I've read too many times, but haven't edited all in one sitting. Where does this fall with regards to your other stories in terms of timeline, if it's in continuity at all? I don't quite recall if you've explained this before, so forgive me if it's in a previous thread. Should I recognize that other pony flying to and from RD's? Have we seen Roc again in any other stories (where he's mentioned by name I mean)?
>> No. 34938
Here's Soft Candy edited.
http://pastebin.com/NLUpVG8d

I'll probably post another later today.
>> No. 34939
Come into her House (Ed)
http://pastebin.com/31TWgBrZ

Big Mac has the Blues (Ed)
http://pastebin.com/bu81VJvs

I'm better off getting it out of the way now.
>> No. 35023
are you ded?
was it the cracked article?
>> No. 35024
>>35023

The only thing disappointing about the Cracked article was that it was in Cracked, and not something more respectable like MAD. I shouldn't be so picky, at least it wasn't the brony documentary.

>ded?

As active as ever I think. Though I'm drawing much more now than writing pony.

Are you referring to fimfiction? I deleted that account before the whole Cracked article happened. All my stories are still on ePFA, PFA, and pastebin. A few other places I think. All the upthreads links should still work fine.

Except my tumblr, I think. My currently active one is:

RSUpshift.tumblr.com
>> No. 35025
cracked article?
>> No. 35027
>>35025

http://www.cracked.com/quick-fixes/4-insane-pieces-my-little-pony-fan-art-by-grown-men/

RagingSemi's "Lunch" fic comes in at #3.
>> No. 35028
>>35024
Any specific reason for that?
>> No. 35029
>>35028
Why did I delete my fimfiction account? Several reasons. Long story short, I didn't want to be associated with that particular part of the community any more.
>> No. 35033
>>35029
I've always preferred pastebin and GDocs over fanfiction websites, not that it's any of my business.

Can we expect any new stories in the near future?
>> No. 35034
>>35033
I doubt it. Though I didn't write that Babs story until you asked what I was up to, so you never know.
>> No. 35035
>>35034
On a scale of 1-10, I'm excite. Honest to goodness truth, I'm still your biggest fan. I'll be here until you tell me you're done, and I'll edit until you tell me to stop. We're all busy though, and I know it gets harder and harder to find free time, so I'm happy waiting. I know you wouldn't, but don't let me pressure you.
I liked the Babs story, though I thought the episode was a bit contrived. Did the character resonate with you, or did you simply write it on a whim? Perhaps you know someone who went through something similar? Is that too personal a question to ask?
>> No. 35036
>>35035
When you asked what I was up too, I had been juggling a whole bunch of different things at once, and it caught me by surprise, so I felt both annoyed and pressured. Then I felt guilty because I'm quite conscious of how little pony I've been writing over the last year. There wasn't any drive for me to pick up The Equestrian Renaissance again. I was lying in bed trying to think of a story to tell. So I thought about recent episodes. At the end of One Bad Apple, they hit you with this surprise back story for this new character, and it's like the writers gave the viewers a gift. "Hey, here's a writing prompt, now go tell this story."

I don't think there's an adult on this earth who didn't spend at least some time as a child alternatively both being bullied and being a bully, whether it's physical abuse or something as simple as name-calling. So it's something everybody should be able to connect with. Fear and hate are as universal as love and sex. The story also had the advantage of being completely separated from the show's canon, fanon, my previous stories, and so on. There wasn't any weight holding it down. It could have been a human story. If people hadn't seen the episode they'd never know it was pony fanfic at all, it was just a story. One of the things I like in fiction is when the villain comes to the conscious decision that they're going to be the story's villain. Not a sympathetic, misunderstood figure, or some guy who thinks he's doing right and is just way out of touch. But a proper dastardly, malevolent villain. Iago, or Don John, or the man who corrupts Hadleyburg. Once I had the final lines I knew I had to write the story first thing in the morning.

Unfortunately season 3 seems pretty short of material to work with. I've thought about writing an epistolary story from the perspective of Cloudchaser, or whatever the name is, from that Dash episode. Her life long dream is to join the Wonderbolts. Is excited about going to the recruitment camp. Then realizes she's completely outclassed by Dash and Dust. She's distraught. Works through it anyway. Bonds with the steroid pony. Just ends up doing the best she can and has fun in the process. Optimistic ending. Just haven't found the motivation to start on that yet.

In S1E1, it sets up the idea that the ponies of ancient times never cared for Luna or her night. That took on a new dimension with the Sleepless in Ponyville episode, when her Morpheus-like nature was revealed. She haunts people's dreams, subconsciousness, deepest secrets, so if the ponies didn't like her, she'd really know about it. So what if her encounter with Pip results in somebody actually liking her for the first time, on a subconscious level. Or loving her. What if they could spend an entire lifetime together, a lifetime of adventure and swashbuckling and romance and danger, all in a single night's dream, with both Pip and Luna being conscious players both. I've ended up drawing that story instead of writing it. Something about it just seems more suited for illustrations than text.

Except for that, I haven't got a lot to work with.
>> No. 35037
>>35036
>so I felt both annoyed and pressured
This is what I try and avoid, so I'll apologize for making you feel that way. That we got a story out of it is a good thing, but I'd rather you not feel pressured to write. If you're short on material to work with (which I understand completely) then that's fine - thanks for the update, at least I know what's going on now. Nice job with recent drawings by the way. I'd ask about a mixed medium story, but I'd better not. Hehe.

I just need to edit 'Lost and Found in Equestria' and the whole first page of the pastebin will be done. Maybe as I clean up some old things you'll get a little inspiration. Unfortunately we're both pressed for time, so maybe it's for the best that this season is a little lacklustre.

Thanks for keeping us in the loop RS. Looking forward to the next one, whenever it might come.
>> No. 35054
Congrats on having one of your stories turned into a visual novel. I'd congrat megasweet, but I can't contact him anymore :<
>> No. 35055
>>35054
Beat me to the punch. Over 8300 views on the pastebin for LMW as well. Congratulations. Can we expect the same to happen to other stories?
>> No. 35057
>>35054
Thanks. Feels a bit anti-climactic compared to when he first did that title page, and started streaming the sketches. But I'm glad it's finally done.

>>35055
LMW's about 10,850 reads on ePFA, that's up about four hundred since MS released it wed. night. That's a pretty brisk clip. Haven't noticed any major movement in the other stories of that futa series.

When Cracked posted about Lunch, readcount more than doubled. 3,000 reads over a three or four day period. It's now dramatically petered off. No increased reading of Breakfast or any other story.
>> No. 35058
>>35054
Did something happen to megasweet?
>> No. 35059
>>35058
he's been quiet.....and he's never on skype unless invisi maybe. -shrug- Maybe he'll show at bronycon this year. Speaking of, RS you should try to show too if you can. Be fun to see you.
>> No. 35060
>>35059
Well thanks, but I'm not really the convention going type. Maybe if I was good enough to sell prints, but I'm a couple more years of practice away from being that good.

If you want to get a hold of MS, he still streams pretty regularly on Wednesday nights. And semi-regularly on weekends.
>> No. 35061
>>35060
I would suggest fiber, then.
>> No. 35140
Why did RS take his stuff off from fimfiction?
>> No. 35154
Hey RS!
An old time fan of yours here. Just coming back to fincham makes me a bit nostalgic. Keep up the good work and being awesome.

>>35140
He already answered. Sure it was too vague but honestly, with how big the fandom is now, specific details on how someone would find annoying, terrible or idiotic behaviors on a certain part of the community aren't necesary.
>> No. 35156
>>35154
it's the usual "the readers are idiots" then.
I completely agree.

>>35154
in RagingSemi's epic boner tales, all of the ponies are made of food.
>all of the ponies are made of food.

And now that I was actually thinking that site wasn't too bad.
>> No. 35175
I'm looking for a story that I could have sworn was done by you, RS. It's a Twilight x Rainbow Dash shipfic that features Dash giving Twilight a tour of Cloudsdale before going to a concert. The fic features actual quotes of a song, which I can't remember. Please help.
>> No. 35195
>>35175
You're looking for "Storm Warning." That wasn't written by RS, but by LordVurtax on deviantart and FimFiction. He took it down, but let me save it beforehand in case anyone else still wants them. Want me to send it to you via mail?
>> No. 35199
>>35195
Yes, please! I've been looking everywhere for it! Thank you so much!
>> No. 35201
>>35140

I got fed up with it. Yes, part of it is the userbase. Apparently there's a number of people starting phony accounts just to upvote and comment on their own stuff. Honestly though, I've never been happy with it from the beginning. There's something that strikes me as incredibly inane about submitting an amateur fanfic online for editorial approval for publication. For fuck's sake, it's fanfiction, why the fuck do I need some jackass's approval to publish fanfiction? And even then, it's not like there's any real editorial control, because your story ends up published next to the Twilight Sparkle x Yu Gi Oh shipping fic where they battle evil rule 63 Captain Picard and the author's Mean Mom Who Doesn't Let Him Stay Up Late. Then there's the whole tagging system where every little detail needs to be entered. That whole Babs story ended with the surprise twist, but if that had been filled out, there would have been no surprise. There wouldn't be any reason to read it. It's all about a search engine for for readers who want specific details, without any care about the story telling itself. And that's a theme running through all sorts of problems. It's all about drama or brony fandom or some shit, I don't understand it, but whatever it is, it's not about telling a story, which is the only thing I ever cared about in the first place. And the readership... everybody liked the second-person wish-fullfillments which had essentially had nothing to do with the show, and I felt like a heel writing more of them. Not that I didn't think they were OK. But second person? Really? The straw that broke the camel's back was their decision to go back and retroactively go back and delete humanized lolicon fics. Which goes back to the issue of needing somebody's permission to publish amateur fics in the first place. Fuck it all.
>> No. 35203
>>35201
Well, that doesn't change the fact that a well done story will be read and enjoyed. Raging's works are the only reason i still come back to this here page, to see if he has updated something.
>> No. 35204
>>35201
This is why I have, and always will prefer pastebins and Google Docs over any other form of "publication".
I don't see the need to use anything else unless you're trying to get more views. Let them come to you. Write good stories and it'll spread by word of mouth.
>> No. 35205
>>35203
I have gotten caught up in other threads, but I essentially come here because of this.

>>35204
Only website I can think of which would be an improvement over just Google docs and a link would be one where people actually help you write better with good advice about storytelling and writing. And you can do that already do that on Google Docs with the comment feature.
>> No. 35206
>>35205
Agreed. I can't say I do it all the time, but when I do have free time I try and help out some friends of mine with editing and proof-reading and such. GDocs really does have everything you need, except for a "reads" counter.
>> No. 35207
>>35206
It used to have it, with a graph and everything, but got removed.
>> No. 35223
eq ren, chapter 27, just a fragment. Best I can do.

http://pastebin.com/ZKgcL3ST
>> No. 35242
>>35223
Wait... Eq Ren is still going!? If so, YES! I thought it was dead!
>> No. 35245
>>35242
Pretty sure the "Best I can do." pretty much confirms that Raging isn't writing anymore, and that it's probably dead.
>> No. 35248
>>35245
Or it means it's not done/not ready anytime soon, and he doesn't want to leave us flapping in the wind waiting on a new chapter. Or thinking he's dead.

I expect(and dearly hope) that if and when RS decides to quit, he'll tell us flat out.
>> No. 35279
>>35223
Bump. Not letting ER die.
That teaser is killer -- would love to know more about the exploits in Africa.
>> No. 35282
>>35279
Mate, I like your enthusiasm, but something tells me you ain't doing nothing productive.
>> No. 35283
>>35282
Well then let's take advantage of the bump.

Holy Guacamole, edited
http://pastebin.com/pnJbqAWL


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